linguistic register example

     Linguistic register is the type or the way you present your speech or presentation. This is important because without it then every thing you say or do would look unprofessional. For example look at the piece of text below it is riddled with mistakes. This is important for my task 

     

     The bad version
     I get asked all the time what is the aim of my short film and i say that it's to make people realise that emotional abuse is mean. in my opinion this type is the worst because there basically getting bullied.

     

     There are many things wrong with this short paragraph, for example it is to conversational and it is also really boring. This is effective because the audience will not take me seriously and they would not be interested in my type of abuse. there is also a spelling mistake realize is spelled like this and in the text it is spelled 'realise'.

     This is the better version                                                                                   
     In life I believe that psychological abuse to women should be publicised more to the public to make them more aware. In my opinion emotional abuse is the worst type of abuse because it attacks women not physically but emotionally.   


     By using linguistic register i was able to turn my bad paragraph into a appealing paragraph. For example the paragraph above is more formal  This one is better because it is more formal and has better punctuation.